Tuesday, 29 July 2008

• I wrote this poem. it sucks, i know it, but its a rough draft. Tell me what you think.

  About: This is for every friend who ever blocked me online, even though i have no clue what i did...

  (fear it, it sucks and its long and somewhat dramatized...i tried to rhyme...and it became this...)

  My dear friend, an Angel sent from above,

  What did I do?

  Please tell me

  To make you mad

  Or make you sad

  Enough to block me from your life

  
  Did I do something wrong?

  Did I say something bad

  To make you mad

  Or hurt

  Or sad?

   

  I’m sorry if I did

  Forgive me,

  Talk to me

  Tell me how I can fix what I don’t understand

  Because you helped me be able to stand

  When I was scared to face my fears so please

  Tell me

  Tell me

  Tell me how this right?

   

  What did I do?

  I wish to know

  Tell me

  Tell me

  So I can fix what I might have done

  And better understand what’s gone wrong

   

  This is not like you

  Help me

  Help me

  Understand this problem

  Because I cannot bear to have my life

  Without you for much longer

   

  You are my friend, an Angel

  You made me laugh

  And told me things

  I could have not heard from other beings

  Our friendship is important to me

  And I hope it is the same to you

  Maybe it is, maybe not

  But please tell me before my life rots

   

  I am your friend

  And will always be there for you

  But tell me

  Tell me

  What I must do:

  1. To better understand why you’ve locked the door

  2. To be better friends forever more

   

  *end*

  Give me feedback, or not. oh, this thursday i'm leaving for Family, etc. wont be back until the 10th of August.

  So ya, feedback and see y'all later

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